"Hi."
"Hi."
Not knowing, then knowing. The strangeness was dispelled and the familiarity pitched.
"Didn't I see you this morning?" said she.
"Ah ... I believe you may have, yes," said he with his voice, while the rest of the dissident's internal capacities ignited and flamed, a gentle warmth now spreading everywhere.
"Looking for a new dress?" she said. His eyebrows darted together and confusion beset. He looked up. Then he looked around. While possessing eyes for naught but her, unbeknownst to him he had wandered into the women's clothing section on that floor of the department store.
"Ah - yeah - I'm just browsing, actually." Her face was painted in neutral tones, despite the obvious inference that the supremacy was with her. She could have chosen to wither him right there and then, but she did not. How can this be possible? he thought instantly. She stood out to him like a blazing lighthouse on a single dark hill in a single dark night. Not just beautiful, beautiful didn't cover it. He could have spent a lifetime writing that word over and over and over again down on endless sheets of paper, and still it would not match what he sought to now describe, to feebly put into words she which stood before him. S.H.
9 comments:
This story is awesome!!!!!! xD
<3 A Wonderland of Thought
A lady with power. Curious. Do these sort of women attract you too Shaun? Come to which...I think I am in need of a new dress too:P
Until then.
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Any dress that speaks out to me, I'll buy. Simple with a touch of personality is my apparent taste according to friends. Nothing too complicated:)
You know, I'd love a guy who just understands me. Like you said a while back. Acceptance takes time. If I could find a guy who I could accept and he accepts me wholly, I'd be a happy bunny:)
Until next time.
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I know what you mean regarding perfection. Really, who invented such a word when it never means what it means.
Strange, I can't seem to get updates from your blog anymore. Neither can I click on it, it states that the blog no longer exists. I can only get through when i click on your complete profile and then click on your blog link. Not sure what to do:S
Until then.
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It does work now but it's a shame. Balderdash sounded pretty awesome:)
It's weird, I wonder why it didnt' work. You didn't have to change it back for my sake. The issue may have only happened to me. :S
Until next time.
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Sounds like a good plan. I mean, you blog didn't go missing completely. I'm sure a couple of clicks will not be a problem for everyone. When you change your name, I'll stop following then re-follow:)
Until then.
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Dance a little dance of joy Shaun because it works:P. It didn't even take long either. Wow. You know what that means? If everyone unfollows[it's got a red squiggly line at the bottom of this word so I don't know if it exists], then follows again then I'd be your first follower:D
The beginnings of a regime of Balderdash-ness:D
Until next time.
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Haha, my cheeks feel scarlet red. It's a privilege:) Don't underestimate yourself, people follow blogs for a reason. They may not feel the need to comment, but they would follow you because your writing is a rare talent found in this world.
Until then.
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Love this!
I did what you said, (because you were right, the updates weren't showing).
And I shall never ever stop being mad! Never fear!
:)
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