Wednesday, 1 September 2010

Jungle Drum

The drums began to tap in the distance, gradually building up their volume like an approaching train. The dissident looked for somewhere to hide, an instinctive reaction, and tried his best not to unsettle his head. The figure drifted closer, but still she did not see him. There were enough clothes racks and shinny shelves to help him blend, the constant buzz of beings helping his cause. She moved closer still. He tried his best to think like paint, to become part of the scenery and melt into the walls, a white boy on the white wash. He had noticed her in an instant, his body realising before his brain. The sight of her face from afar enough to squeeze his heart like a sponge. His skin crackled and shifted its nervous weight with alarming fervour, his blood thundering around his veins with exactly the same idea as to what to do with itself as he. S.H.

6 comments:

Intrigued.shesays said...

An ex lover? A current lover?? Feed me more! I love your description. I should inspire to be like paint to escape madness at times too.

You are close as to it is an illusion, but what is you may never know. Then again, I might tell you one day.

Acceptance huh? You're right. Sometimes it takes an eternity to accept.

Until then.
xx

KittyBonkers said...

Ooooo who is she to have such a reaction?! I understood this one this time hehe!!

And yeesh, believe in what you feel not what other people tell you!! Other people can be wrong, only you know what feels right!! And what are Rahs? Are they like preppy girls? Haha thanks!! I don't mean to go against convention, but convention is too dull and not my taste!

Kitty

A Wonderland of Thought said...

ooooooo! This just keeps getting better!!!! xD I am LOVING this story! Please Sir, Can I have some more? (haha sorry, I am reading Oliver Twist for Literature at the moment!) You are keeping me guessing alright!

And indeed, great minds do think alike! ;)

<3 A Wonderland of Thought

Natalia Buia said...

Publish a book already!

A Wonderland of Thought said...

Yay! I am so excited for this story! xD

<3 A Wonderland of Thought

Jennifer Louise said...

I like the energy in this one.

Ex girlfriend perhaps?

Hahah.